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M froghat.ca/2024/06/atlast/index.rst
M froghat.ca/2024/06/civ4-ui/index.rst

@@ 105,7 105,7 @@ atlast.exe
 
 The second program is a command line tool for unpacking an atlas like *GameFont.tga* into individual images & repacking the images back into a single atlas.
 
-It creates a manifest to store information about the atlas other than the image data of the cells themselves. This includes the sequence of cells in each and the sequence of rows in the image.
+It creates a manifest to store information about the atlas other than the image data of the cells themselves. This includes the sequence of cells in each row and the sequence of rows in the image.
 
 It looks something like this:
 

@@ 13,7 13,7 @@ Steam, an app store for computer games, has a survey that samples the hardware o
 .. _2008: https://web.archive.org/web/20081214160840/http://store.steampowered.com/hwsurvey/
 .. _more recent survey in 2024: https://web.archive.org/web/20240407193236/https://store.steampowered.com/hwsurvey/
 
-Resolutions have increased but so have display sizes. These days days, we have more pixels on our monitors, but they tend to be larger monitors. The *pixel density* of both a **24" 1920x1080** display and a **32" 2560x1440** is **92** :abbr:`PPI (pixels per inch)`. 
+Resolutions have increased but so have display sizes. These days, we have more pixels on our monitors, but they tend to be larger monitors. The *pixel density* of both a **24" 1920x1080** display and a **32" 2560x1440** is **92** :abbr:`PPI (pixels per inch)`.
 Though, it's not uncommon to find **27" 2560x1440** displays with a PPI of **109**.
 
 In olden times, you could get **92** PPI from a **14" 1024x768** display or **96** PPI on a **17" 1280x1024** display.