From a99dd29a2f27e9c7ffe4cacde86fb724067603f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marcus Rohrmoser <work@mro.name>
Date: Wed, 25 Sep 2024 15:17:47 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] wording.

---
 en/support/index.html | 19 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/support/index.html b/en/support/index.html
index 7acc8a3..649defd 100644
--- a/en/support/index.html
+++ b/en/support/index.html
@@ -45,17 +45,18 @@ Personal Social Web
     server-side scripting nor obligatory javascript. You can backup all files and restore in case.
     There are no dependencies to install nor tend.</p>
     <h1 id="webspace"><a href="#webspace">🏡 Webspace</a></h1>
-    <p>To create a www address<a id="ref:0:fn:url" href="#fn:url" name="ref:0:fn:url">[1]</a>
-    <a>https://example.com/subdirectory/hello.txt</a> and publish content, about the simplest way
-    is to</p>
+    <p>To create a www address<a id="ref:0:fn:url" href="#fn:url" name="ref:0:fn:url">[1]</a> like
+    e.g.<br />
+    <a>https://example.com/subdirectory/hello.txt</a><br />
+    and publish content, about the simplest way is to</p>
     <ol>
-      <li>rent simple webspace with SSL and a domain name offered by numerous shared web hosting
-      vendors,</li>
+      <li>rent simple webspace with SSL and a domain name (here: example.com) offered by numerous
+      shared web hosting vendors,</li>
       <li>have write<a id="ref:0:fn:ftp" href="#fn:ftp" name="ref:0:fn:ftp">[2]</a> access to the
       server<a id="ref:0:fn:server" href="#fn:server" name="ref:0:fn:server">[3]</a> backing
-      <a>https://example.com</a>. Typically via <a>sftp://example.com</a>, the write credentials
-      told by your vendor and e.g. FileZilla<a id="ref:0:fn:filezilla" href="#fn:filezilla" name=
-      "ref:0:fn:filezilla">[4]</a>,</li>
+      <a>https://example.com</a>. Typically via <a>sftp://example.com</a> plus the write
+      credentials you got from your vendor plus e.g. FileZilla<a id="ref:0:fn:filezilla" href=
+      "#fn:filezilla" name="ref:0:fn:filezilla">[4]</a>,</li>
       <li>inside that space, create a directory named to your liking, (here:
       <a>subdirectory</a>),</li>
       <li>into that directory, upload the file (here: <a>index.txt</a>) with the according
@@ -95,7 +96,7 @@ Personal Social Web
       <li>for the #Seppo server to have the address <a>https://example.com/subdirectory/</a> do
       upload<a id="ref:1:fn:ftp" href="#fn:ftp" name="ref:1:fn:ftp">[2]</a> <code>seppo.cgi</code>
       to your webspace into a directory named <a>subdirectory</a>. That name is to your liking. If
-      your provider requires so, care for the <a href="/S1037">/cgi-bin/ subdirectory
+      your webspace requires so, care for the <a href="/S1037">/cgi-bin/ subdirectory
       requirement</a>,</li>
       <li>ensure the uploaded file is named <code>seppo.cgi</code> and has file permissions 'read +
       executable' (numeric value 555), e.g. via right-click in the ftp program,</li>
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