3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

M hgwiki/tiddlers/2022-08-16-vampire0-character10.tid
M hgwiki/tiddlers/2022-08-16-vampire0-journal-entry13.tid
M hgwiki/tiddlers/2022-08-16-vampire0-memory10-experience0.tid

@@ 9,4 9,4 @@ tags: 2022-08-16-vampire0 character ThousandYearOldVampire
 title: 2022-08-16-vampire0-character10
 type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 
-Chasca, a young woman from Cuzco that I kept to teach me about the city.
+Chasca, a young shepherd girl from Cuzco that I kept to teach me about the city.

@@ 18,7 18,7 @@ Create a Character and a Skill related to keeping them captive.
 I found Chasca at a large market in the other side of the city. She seemed to fit in really well with the 
 people here and everybody around her accepted her very easily. Nobody seemed afraid or distrustful of her.
 
-I took her one night when she was walking alone. She now lives in one of my rooms whose walls I covered with grass and blankets to muffle her noises.
+I took her one night when she was walking alone heading back to her herd in the fields. She now lives in one of my rooms whose walls I covered with grass and blankets to muffle her noises.
 
 I would give her food as payment for teaching me the language and explaining to me things I didn't understand about how the city people behaved.
 

@@ 7,4 7,4 @@ tags: 2022-08-16-vampire0-memory10 ThousandYearOldVampire experience
 title: 2022-08-16-vampire0-memory10-experience0
 type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 
-I took Chasca, a girl friendly with many on the other side of the city, and kept her in a room protected by grass and blankets so that she could give me advice on fitting in with the humans of the city better; I did not feed on her or anybody within the city.
+I took Chasca, a friendly shepherd girl on the other side of the city, and kept her in a room protected by grass and blankets so that she could give me advice on fitting in with the humans of the city better; I did not feed on her or anybody within the city.